

Chapter 1 Page 18
I like this page a lot! Big fan. allow me to self congratulate and talk about some of my favorite things:
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The top two panels flow together real well
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the tread marks on the snakes in the first panel is a cute, silly Detail.
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I love having the "CLANG" onomatopoeia be a tag that doubles as a whole panel. The way it pops out from the scribbled border is cool, too.
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You can see me start to experiment with how I draw the detail in Kicks' buns depending on how fast she's moving.
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The way Kicks' eyes pop out of her face in a more expressive way is nice. You can see me getting more familiar with the character design.
You can really see Sky Limit's art come together here, and while I continue to toot on my own horn- future pages are even better :)
Posted August 31st, 2024